My mouth hovers across your breasts
in the short grey winter afternoon in this bed we are delicate and touch so hot with joy we amaze ourselves tough and delicate we play rings around each other our daytime candle burns with its peculiar light and if the snow begins to fall outside filling the branches and if the night falls without announcement there are the pleasures of winter sudden, wild and delicate your fingers exact my tongue exact at the same moment stopping to laugh at a joke my love hot on your scent on the cusp of winter “My mouth hovers across your breasts” explains the author’s intimate cravings of the woman in bed with her. The author specifically uses hover because she wanted to describe how sexually attracted she was to her. Just as if the moment that she experienced wasn’t so true. The author uses delicate to describe the tantalizing form of expression for her woman. She emphasizes intensity of their bodies connecting as one. Then she refers to “tough and delicate we play rings” to their playfulness as being rough with their movements and then slowly becoming passionate towards one another. The author describes the intimate setting as she lies on top of her significant other in hope of enticing her mentally, physically, and emotionally. The candles burning around the room is symbol of their burning love for one another. The author describes the winter as setting the mood, which confirms the intimate atmosphere. She uses “pleasures of winter sudden, wild and delicate” to explain the actions of her and her lover. The author emphasizes exact to show the precise movement of her tongue on the woman’s body. She concludes with “my love hot on your scent” to show how engaged she is with this woman. The tone throughout this poem reveals an explicit relationship between her and another woman. It creates a deep feeling of intense affection that exhuberates the mood.
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